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如果今年又是考四格漫畫

你開頭會怎麼寫呢?

該不會是....It was a rainy day. / It was a sunny day.

大家都這樣寫~~~~~

好平凡啊!

以天氣為開頭的作文 你可以看看這些例子: 

 

Lily was as miserable as the weather outside her window.  (Lily跟窗外的天氣一樣悲慘)


It has been snowing for the whole week. (雪下了整整一星期)


The rain was pouring down from the sky. (天空正下著傾盆大雨)


A cold, chilly draft blew through the window into Nina's room.(一陣寒風從Nina的窗戶吹了進來)


The morning snow had just stopped. (早上的雪剛停了下來)

 

光是天氣就可暗示你的故事是幸還是不幸了

你也不需要用太難的字詞

只要不是流水帳風格就好

 

記得  第一句很重要!

要是你可緊緊抓住讀者的胃口

你就成功了

 

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