有關旅遊的故事

大家開頭都只會寫"I took a trip to ..... last year." 

你也是這樣嗎?  

 

 

以下是較好的開頭範例:

Traveling is always the best thing to spice up my life.(旅遊一直是使我生活增添風味的首選)

We were on the plane leaving for China that day.(那天,我們正搭著前往中國的飛機)

I had done something daring when I was just an elementary school student - I traveled to Australia on my own! (小學的我做過一件超級大膽的事--我自己一個人去澳洲旅行!)

Something extraordinary happened during my trip to the US.(我去美國旅行時,發生了一件奇特的事)

 

想在幾千份幾萬份考卷中脫穎而出

那麼.....拜託~~不要再用流水帳寫故事啦!

 

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